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okay I will not say anymore that i fail because people will kill me haha
thank you all for every kindness and it was fun to draw it!
colored pencils.
ps. there are no spoilers! you're just slow *joke*
I'm more active on my tumblr if you need something dorei-shounen.tumblr.com
have a nice day!
okay I will not say anymore that i fail because people will kill me haha
thank you all for every kindness and it was fun to draw it!
colored pencils.
ps. there are no spoilers! you're just slow *joke*
I'm more active on my tumblr if you need something dorei-shounen.tumblr.com
have a nice day!
Image size
976x485px 276.2 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5100
Shutter Speed
10/300 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
26 mm
ISO Speed
900
Date Taken
May 2, 2014, 2:37:50 PM
© 2014 - 2024 DoreiShounen
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Okay, let me start with some positives of this drawing.
Looking through your gallery, I noticed that you have a specific style and way of using your colouring pencils. The main thing I like about your artowork is skin colouring. I always had a problem with it, you managed to make it flow and I'm jealous to be honest. Furthermore I like the use of red - the shading is amazing and eyes, you made them shine. Also, I like that you have proportions right, it's always a pain for me.
Now, the things I don't really enjoy about this.
Hair colouring - I absolutely know that it's just your style but in my opinion it's the main thing you have to improve on. They look 'dull', I see a lack of shading and they look unrealistic comparing to the rest of the drawing. Secondly, unfinished heads. I mean these endings of the tops. I really don't like this in drawings that's why I pointed that out. And finally - backgrounds! I know it's a pain in the ass but without them, these beautifully done drawings lose their epicness. I didn't do them at the beginning as well but when I start adding them my drawings dragged more attention (I think?) and people seemed to be more satisfied.
The drawing overall is truly amazing and even breathtaking, you really did a great job.
Alright, I hope I wrote this critique fairly enough and you're not gonna kill me... Or will you?
Greetings.